"So, I got a question for you."
"That's not a question."
"The question's implicit."
"No, it isn't. That's an absurd statement."
"Fine. How does one write good dialogue?"
"You're asking me?"
"You are the professional writer."
"Some would say you've got a good ear for it."
"That is the term of art used."
"Term of art?"
"Term of art. Because, that's right... The yard for the boy."
"Yard for the boy?"
"Well, that's the whole..."
"What are you talking about?"
"You're supposed to ask, 'What is a 'term of art'?"
"That's the dialogue."
"Are we doing Mamet or something?"
"Fuck that, I'm not doing Mamet."
"Maybe you should."
"Look at the theatre, if nothing else. You want to write dialogue, listen to people, listen to the rhythm of how they talk. But also pay attention to playwrights. Their craft is almost entirely dialogue."
"You were a playwright."
"I've written plays, yes."
"And that's helped you write dialogue?"
"I think it was crucial in developing my craft. In my development of my craft. Same with being an actor. I had to take those words and put them through my mouth. When I write dialogue, I'm constantly thinking about what it would be like to say them."
"And that helps?"
"Absolutely it helps. If it sounds right being spoken, if you can get that in your ear-- see, there's the term of art--"
"Please don't start that again."
"But if you can get it in your ear, then it rings true on the page. They hear it. They hear the voice of the character. Sometimes so well, you don't even have to attribute the dialogue."
"Hell, yes. Check out Rules for Werewolves by Kirk Lynn. It's a novel that's only unattributed dialogue. And Lynn? Playwright."
"Worth checking out?"
"Completely. So, again: watch, read, listen, then write. Got it?"
Thursday, November 12, 2015
Dialogue on dialogue
Posted by Marshall Ryan Maresca
Marshall Ryan Maresca is a Fantasy and Science Fiction Novelist, as well as a playwright, living in South Austin with his wife and son. He is the author of the Maradaine Novels:
The Thorn of Dentonhill, A Murder of Mages , The Alchemy of Chaos, An Import of Intrigue , The Holver Alley Crew, The Imposters of Aventil , Lady Henterman's Wardrobe , The Way of the Shield (October 2018) and A Parliament of Bodies (March 2019).
His work also appeared in Norton Anthology of Hint Fiction and Rick Klaw’s anthology Rayguns Over Texas. He also has had several short plays produced.
Visit his website at mrmaresca.com