Need a Dragon: Yeah. Actually, just don't. I love dragons. The thing is, I keep running cross stories (no, I'm not mentioning names) where the dragons are, well, not very tough. If you're going to invoke a gigantic fire breathing ANYTHING into your stories, said beasts should be the shit everything else wants to run from.
Orcs. they're cool. I get it. Trolls, ogres, ors, goblins. All cool. Make your own armies of scary stuff instead. that's my suggestion.
Metal bikinis. I'm a guy. I LOVE eye candy. Unless your character is suicidal, she ain't wearing a metal bikini to a sword fight. I will forgive Red Sonja, but only because she's actually tough enough to get away with it and she did it first (Or close enough. I'm not about to research the subject.). The same of men in furry loincloths. I'm talking Conan here. Go read a few of the books and stories by Howard. It's amazing how often he wore pants, shirts and even armor.
Switch does not wear metal Bikinis. She kills the silly things that give her that many openings in their defenses.
Snark Attacks. There's a time and a place. Two cops walking through a crime scene where the bad guys are gone I might forgive a little gallows humor. Two cops in a gunfight with fifteen paramilitary psychos carrying heavy artillery? (Or the fantasy equivalent thereof) Not so much.
A very wise friend once told me when I was starting out that the best way to avoid imitating someone else was to write something new. What a lovely, simple and flawless logic.
I think the wisecracks in the middle of a fight thing actually makes me peevish LOL! Is it too late to go back and add that to my Saturday post???
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ReplyDeleteI am with you on the dragons, it makes me cringe when a dragon can't hold their own and are soft. Dragons with humor, love it. Dragons who can bake, excellent as long as they can still fry a knight.
ReplyDeleteI agree completely.
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